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TOPIC: suggestions for a title please?
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suggestions for a title please? 16 Years, 9 Months ago
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this was written long ago but i have never given it a title, anyone care to make a suggestion?
my soul a
churning, seething
emptiness within.
memories
muddied like the
waters of a river
during a storm.
my heart torn
never to be whole.
pain and frustration
fill my being,
taken from me
torn from me.
hope abandoned
feelings vanished
thoughts subdued
tell me
did I die too?
Alive!!!!
My soul
Tranquil, serene
Filled again
Memories
Pure like a
Stream after
Melting snows
My heart
Beating again
Contentment and happiness
Visit me once again
The void filled
Hope essential
Feelings created
Thoughts thunderous
YOU have made me
LOVE again
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Re:suggestions for a title please? 16 Years, 9 Months ago
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once and again
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_Em_
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Re:suggestions for a title please? 16 Years, 9 Months ago
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Circles of life
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Nidi
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Nidi
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Re:suggestions for a title please? 16 Years, 9 Months ago
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A Soul Reborn
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Re:suggestions for a title please? 16 Years, 9 Months ago
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Stream of Emotion
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Re:suggestions for a title please? 16 Years, 9 Months ago
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"Sapphire Serenity"
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